Oh this song is still awesome.
Yes. And I still remember the lyrics.
Honestly- shit happens. Glad you're back.
But ignoring that.
Kirizzle has apparently fallen off the edge of the earth. I haven't seen him in forever myself. I are saddened by this. :(
Damned impressive.
I gotta say, I don't normally listen to hip-hop, but this is one of the best-produced songs I have heard on here.
Very impressive, and hell, five for you + McAwesomeBurger.
I wish I could give you some more in-depth criticism, but I'm no expert on hip-hop.
Five't- 4.65 to 4.68.
Nothing clashes, and the mixing levels are perfect. Well done.
thx bro it was higher but theres a fake movement going around and they cant stand the real
That piano
Is awesome.
I can't imagine why. I like this song a whole bunch, and I wanted to put off reviewing it until the new version was uploaded. And you did a really good job with this! From what I've heard of the other submissions, this one really stands on its own.
The piano is an awesome way to start the song, and the trance/techno elements only add to the awesomeness. It has a driving beat and it fits the picture awesomely.
For this being your second song, I'm blown the fuck away. If you listened to my second song, it was nowhere as good as this. I can't wait to hear what you come up with. :D
McAwesomeBurger for you? :D
MMMMMmmm yummie McAwesomeBurger, with cheese. I watched Iron Man last night for the first time.... lol, I want an American Cheeseburger, press conference.... but cheesburger first.
Thanks for the review and thanks for helping get those pianos sounding more real. I've had a couple other submissions, but they were WIP's (work in progress) and I just removed them after I got some reviews. I kept my first submission up because thats one of the only copies of that song i have (lets just leave it as I had a nasty virus and had to reformat).
BUt anyways, I really appreciate the support and help, its really encouraging and I'm feeling more inclined to spend more of my free time composing instead of being a bum at the beach - though the surf has been good this week. I"ll definitely make sure the next thing I upload is something quality.
Again, thanks.
RR
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Some of the best stufff on her in a while. And at 3:13 sounded like the sound track for an evil circuis.
No fucking kidding. That was a BITCH to figure out what to do with it. >:(
Can't believe I never reviewed this masterpiece.
McAwesome.
INDEED.
PandaKore hit the nail on the head.
So I'm going to rate this as if I had never heard of Soulja Boy.
I only wish.
I love the sine beeping in the beginning, but I really wish, multiple times, that it would break into an awesome synth solo. It would be awesome, really! What you've got going at 1:34 with it is kind of what I was looking for, but do more with it! MOAR!
The drum n' bass part works really well with this song, I'm surprised by it.
It's kind of repetitive, yes, but compared to the original, that's nothing.
Johnny Cash hip hop?
Interesting fusion of elements here.
Okay, now let me start this off with a little disclaimer:
I know pretty close to jack shit about rap/hip-hop. It's not really something I'm a fan of.
However, this seems to have pretty good production values insofar as mastering goes, and the levels are pretty nice, and it's calm, and I like it.
There's just one MAJOR problem though- it's too short. You really don't have any long enough pieces written to show your actual ability as far as music composition goes, I mean sure, these are nice loops, but trying to come up with some baseline of your skill to go off of is damned impossible to do from three loops.
MAKE ME A DAMN SONG.
That's all I ask.
yes, sir...
Interesting.
Yeah, you've got the arrangement and melodic parts of music down :D
Now all you need are some awesome samples, synths, whatever have you, and HOPEFULLY you'll be able to use Reason for that ;)
Love the harmonies you've got going on, and I think the only complaints I could have with this song come on the technical aspects. Beyond those, this is pretty damn good. Now I'll have to look at something newer of yours :D
Sup Solus,
thanks for the review. Um, my technical skills have not gotten much better, but I am currently going through tutorials in FL studios and will be getting reason 4 soon and learning that program. Um, i don't have anything that really is "good" yet.... but I think I wont release another song until its good. I have a bad habit of writing songs in a couple hours then uploading in before i really give much thought to it.
I'm currently working on a dance piece, and will be releasing it under a different user name.... so that way the one account will have only songs i think aren't super beginner. And I'll keep uploading experimental stuff on this account.
I really appreciate the review.
It's awesome.
You know it's awesome.
I know it's awesome.
In fact, one may say McAwesome.
Also, I'm impressed that you've responded to 194 reviews :D
Wow McAwesome, thanks!
I try to respond to as many reviews as I can. I figure if someone likes/hates something enough to comment, I should at least take the time to let them know I've read the review.
Echoz showed me the awesomeness.
Seriously, sax ftw.
I'm a saxophone player, and too few people use it. It's just such a versatile instrument. :(
Honestly- I love the melody, and the drumline goes with it perfectly.
Wouldn't change a thing.
McPerfectBurger for you? :D
Everyone loves the sax! :D Thanks for the review, and your a sax player which makes you 3 times as cool and this review 45times as meaningful <3
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Goddamnit, Rig.
Seriously.
Pads ftw, it's definitely a sign that you don't have to have a melody to have a captivating song.
Though this song is mean to people who have to pee. Like Darkside. Asshole.
Is it really emotional, though?
In a refined sense, no, there's no melody to convey the emotion of tears, sorrow.
But there's the raw feeling here. Slowly descending into a further and further darkness.
So I heard you like pads.
Check out Crystalline (Final), you might like it.
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