I dunno...
The synths were nice... but just nice. Nothing particularly spectacular. Also, they seemed to be missing something, like if you lost your arms.
That's what they were, synths without arms, and I could feel it, and it hurt me to know that they had more potential than this, it just feels like they were neglected as children.
The main melody sounds a bit like your song "Exaggerate"'s main melody. A good melody. Then you took it, chopped its arms off, and raped it to being too repetitive.
Crowd sounds- Wasn't quite my cup of tea, since I'm not a big fan of putting crowds into songs. It also seemed to fuzz out the armless synth even more, making it sound worse.
The slow part- that synth was possibly where it was nicest. Still not amazing, just nicest.
Another thing that bothers me, where's the percussion? This song sounds like it has a lot of missing parts, once you put the percussion in, it'll sound better for that at least.
Bassline- Disappointing. I know you can do better.
All in all, I gotta say, marginal. :p
Painfully honest is better than "ZOMGTHATWASAWESOME"... right?
3'd.